Purple
by jnr1985x

Comment by Purple_Girl:
Bit too close and out of focus on the right.

Purple
by jnr1985x

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
The image looks a little soft as if it was a good idea executed as a snapshot. Needs some adjustments to give it a little pop. I do see some potential in this, however. I'm afraid the title could use a little creativity as well. I do like the composition and subject.

Purple
by jnr1985x

Comment by cynthiann:
A little flat technically, but a really great composition and subject. Better lighting would take this a lot farther. Nice!

Purple
by jnr1985x

Comment by view360:
Clever the way the two central eyes 'join', very well positioned and nice close crop. The lightings a bit dark for the image though, it would be far more striking if a bit brighter.

Peaceful Sleep
by jnr1985x

Comment by ndistress:
A little dark and fuzzy, and such is sleep, but this doesn't seem to say much.

Peaceful Sleep
by jnr1985x

Comment by figaro:
Some constructive criticism: Firstly, the crop isn't doing you any favours. It's just too narrow to score highly. Secondly, the image doesn't do well as a black and white as the lighting is very flat. The black cloth is clumsily arranged, meaning you have a knee floating in mid air and half a hand has been cut off. Most importantly, I don't feel a connection with the subject - it's for these reasons you're scoring badly at the moment. I'm saying this to be helpful, not harsh - hope I have been.

Peaceful Sleep
by jnr1985x

Comment by timote:
Hope you had permission to take this shot. Could have used a slightly longer exposure.

Peaceful Sleep
by jnr1985x

Comment by ShugPug:
Possibly a little underexposed - great idea though!