|06/02/2008 01:19:31 PM|
by kmtregoeComment by signal2noise:
The dark - light progression is good, but the glare (and dirtiness of the glass)to the right of her face impedes the soft flow of the image. Realizing this is a basic editing challenge this is well done. This captures the sadness of saying goodbye very well - as though the darkness will overtake her as the train proceeds from the station.
|06/01/2008 02:58:07 PM|
|05/30/2008 11:19:35 PM|
|05/30/2008 10:37:36 PM|
by kmtregoeComment by wehrmacher:
How about: "Longing" She appears to be either longing to be out participating in, or hiding from whatever she is looking at. Very nice window lighting.
|05/29/2008 12:37:33 AM|
|05/28/2008 01:32:42 PM|
|05/28/2008 11:36:34 AM|
by kmtregoeComment by SaraR:
You have articulated a sense of yearning, of wistfulness perhaps, well. There is a hint of narrative, but also a degree of ambiguity which I like. In terms of the technicals, I feel this could be stronger: perhaps a little of the eye visible, and a slightly different arrangement of the hair (I find the peice behind her open mouth rather distracting). The photo overall hasa rather flat feeling; whether greater sharpness or different lighting would help I am unsure.
|05/28/2008 04:08:27 AM|
|05/27/2008 10:16:19 PM|
|05/25/2008 12:02:06 PM|
school of rock
by kmtregoeComment by lunensa:
I understand the purpose of the library (that's where they are, right?) but I think it's a bit distracting. Cute idea, though, and they look like they're having alot of fun! :o)
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