Oooh Lalalla...
by mqnaufal

Comment by cynthiann:
Perfect clarity, perfect motion, fits the challenge very well. Hard to critique a high scoring photo, but the composition is losing attention, in my opinion, to the subject. Lose some top and left to bring the subject in just a little. That would be my next, and probably final step. I love the colors!!

Oooh Lalalla...
by mqnaufal

Comment by MaryO:
Nice shot! That looks like a tricky exposure to get some definition in the blur and not blow out all the other lights.

Fun in the Water
by mqnaufal

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
It is fun but you don't really play jet skiing.

Fun in the Water
by mqnaufal

Comment by beckydi:
Cool subject, but a tighter crop on the subject might be more eye-catching.

Fun in the Water
by mqnaufal

Comment by jomari:
Great shot.

Shy
by mqnaufal

Comment by basssman7:
If she was a bit farther from the background to get rid of that shadow it would be a very nice portrait of this little girl. Also watch the cropping of the head, either make sure it looks like it was on purpose or do not do it at all. Is there a reason why you took this as a horizontal instead of a verticle shot? I think the extra space fights for the viewer's attention at the sides.

Overall a nice rendering of her which would have been much better with a couple of adjustments. :)

Good luck.

Shy
by mqnaufal

Comment by tjbel05:
focus seems a little soft

Ramadhan Evening
by mqnaufal

Comment by raish:
Pity about the sharpness, but a great subject and well done for the light.

Ramadhan Evening
by mqnaufal

Comment by bvy:
Not terribly interesting. If it's about the buidling the cars and people take something from the shot. The lighting isn't bad though.

Ramadhan Evening
by mqnaufal

Comment by Ronzilla84:
You really nailed this one. I really like it. I wish there weren't cars there though...but it's not like you could help that. Good job.