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by dwainasaurus

Comment by inspzil:
Almost really good. Not sure I like the portrait framing with a crop this tight. The eye on the left has to be shown, or not shown. I don't like that its visible but not totally. 6

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by dwainasaurus

Comment by Covert_Oddity:
Nice portrait. I find the texture of the background a little distracting though.

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Comment by mgarsteck:
I was going to submit something similar to this. The title reminds me of an awesome Metallica song as well.

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Comment by rrandy_reed:
I like how you caugh the light in the subject's eyes.

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical:Nice focus, and your tones are very true-to-life.

Lighting: The backlighting is adds a nice glow, but the front of your subject looks too muted for me.

Composition/Content: I like the tight composition that you achieved, but the subject matter lacks the 'wow' that you see in the higher scoring entries.

My Opinion: While the idea was very creative, I think that the overall execution was below the capabilities shown in your previous entries. 5.31 is about where I'd expect this sort of image to score. Just thumbing through the challenge entries, this one speaks to me as more a a family snapshot than a creative challenge entry. Not bad, just also not terrific.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
This is fun.

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by outland:
I like this idea a lot. Good exposure and focus. Well done. 10

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by jomari:
Lovely shot. I love her expression.

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by sonyalphausr:
cool idea, spunky and fresh

It's Electric
by dwainasaurus

Comment by mindbottling:
I wish I had a pair of those pajamas. Fun expression.