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by merchillio

Comment by lhollimon:
This is a nice candid portrait shot that uses the lines of the fence to draw you to her face. The only thing I would add is careful of your backgrounds...the green door on the right is a bit distracting to the flow of the photo.

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by merchillio

Comment by Frankie_Lv:
Nice image.

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by merchillio

Comment by pillikcam:
Lacks artistic flare. If you were to move the camera angle and shoot down the wire fence with a tight crop on just the tangled hair you might get a more dramatic view. The background is unappealing and the lighting is generally flat. (Shallow depth of field would help). That being said...anytime you can convince someone to stand in the cold and allow their hair to be tangled in barbed wire so you can take a photo...That's got to be worth something. High marks for your salesmanship. Did you buy her lunch? I think you owe her that. Good luck.