Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by allany:

Originally posted by paulbtlw: Greetings from the Critique Club: This image scored pretty well in the challenge, largely down to your colours and a most excellent title. I'm going to be a little harsh in my critique here, so hold onto your hat! I feel it is important to do so because you have nailed the overall composition and some different technical choices would have turned what I think is a poor macro shot into a really good one - you've already done the hard stuff; you deserve a better outcome! First of all, I don't know how much macro experience you have so I apologise if I'm about to tell you stuff you already know. I've spent hours using my specialist macro equipment and know how hard it is. Technical considerations are so important. First off, look at your aperture, f/5.6 gives you way too small a depth of field to have any hope of catching the bee, you've given yourself about 5mm of depth of field, anything outside that will be blurred. Nice bee, lovely flowers and what do we get? The bees butt! Something like f/16 on the same shot and I suspect you'd have given us a lot more. I wouldn't advise a much slower shutter speed for this shot, so you may have needed to push the ISO a bit to make this work. In terms of processing, the highlights on the petals seem to be robbed of detail, I don't know what software you have access to but recovering the highlights would have got you something back here. Also, various filters that enhance tonal contrast would have pulled out extra detail in these areas. Overall, this is a shot that benefits from very fine composition and colouring but one that could have been a whole lot better with a different set up. Best regards Paul

Thanks for the critique. I don't have much experience on macro, so I welcome all your comments. These would help me a lot. Thanks again.

Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by Paul:
Greetings from the Critique Club:

This image scored pretty well in the challenge, largely down to your colours and a most excellent title.

I'm going to be a little harsh in my critique here, so hold onto your hat! I feel it is important to do so because you have nailed the overall composition and some different technical choices would have turned what I think is a poor macro shot into a really good one - you've already done the hard stuff; you deserve a better outcome!

First of all, I don't know how much macro experience you have so I apologise if I'm about to tell you stuff you already know. I've spent hours using my specialist macro equipment and know how hard it is. Technical considerations are so important.

First off, look at your aperture, f/5.6 gives you way too small a depth of field to have any hope of catching the bee, you've given yourself about 5mm of depth of field, anything outside that will be blurred. Nice bee, lovely flowers and what do we get? The bees butt! Something like f/16 on the same shot and I suspect you'd have given us a lot more. I wouldn't advise a much slower shutter speed for this shot, so you may have needed to push the ISO a bit to make this work.

In terms of processing, the highlights on the petals seem to be robbed of detail, I don't know what software you have access to but recovering the highlights would have got you something back here. Also, various filters that enhance tonal contrast would have pulled out extra detail in these areas.

Overall, this is a shot that benefits from very fine composition and colouring but one that could have been a whole lot better with a different set up.

Best regards

Paul

Message edited by author 2011-04-20 04:06:48.

Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by Tolt:
He looks like he was moving his head? If it had been totally still, this would have been absolutely perfect. It's still awesome.

Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice macro!

Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by Bill666:
For me the yellows are a little too much, they don't look natural. And it would have been better to have the bee's eyes in focus. Nice composition though.

Miss Daisy and Mr. Bee
by allany

Comment by TennesseePhoto:
sharp and very warm colors

Worn Battery
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Comment by retiredPhil:
Liked the mundane look.

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Comment by expatdawn:
A good attempt at panning.

Harsh Lighting
by allany

Comment by Teafran:
More a image of lighting than a creative use of lighting. It's hard to rate this because of it's nature. It might have been a better approach to find a subject and then use the lighting to create the image rather than of the light itself.

An Orange Rose
by allany

Comment by Sheryll:
It looks more red to me. A little curves could help here. As is it's a little flat.