Journey's End
by sclephane

Comment by Veiolets:
bright light in the upper right draws my eye - to what? the center leaf is too centered, not interesting. other objects in focus are not pleasing. light on leaf is bad. leaf is not in focus and not interesting as soft focus. looking at this makes my eyes feel dusty!!! 4

Journey's End
by sclephane

Comment by geosmores:
Like the concept. A couple of things that I think hurt the photo are the light in the top right of the photo, and the busyness of the ground.

Journey's End
by sclephane

Comment by Elaine:
I don't often comment anymore, but I will give my opinion on this. I think having the leaf off-center would add interest, perhaps use a leaf with a more interesting shape. Using shadow to cut down on the glare of light helps, but leaves this looking flat. Also, I try to make sure that the shadow covers the entire image so as not to get the distracting light like in the upper right corner.

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by geosmores:
I wish the s-curve was a stronger element in the composition and a bit boring

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by johnmap15:
absolutely no point of interest. To me this is a picture of a bush

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by mkcr:
maybe a little more contrast and less clutter. I like the idea of using natural objects but it is a little too busy

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by rokcuder:
Sorry,but this photo seems a bit boring to me.I think composition is OK,but you could edit light,colors and sharpness a bit.It would be much more apealing.

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by MommaLola:
DNMC - i don't really see the s-curve

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by JuliBoc:
Focus, lighting, and levels all need improvement. The composition needs a point of interest.

Natural Conture
by sclephane

Comment by treimee:
I would like to see a litle more contrast and some more definition.