The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by Pixelstate:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Hi...

I'm glad I was assigned this image by the critique club. This is certainly a different take on the subject and it is good to see an injection of Humour.

I'm wondering if you thought that the image would do well in the challenge or not. 80th is a bit harsh IMO. There is definately a knack to entering 'winning' shots on DPC and as a contributor you need to decide whether to enter a challenge or not... Do you have a great idea and really strong image or do you just enter for the spirit of the challenge and hope for some contructive critique and useful comments even though you know the voters will probably low vote it.

If you look at my profile you will see that I have had mixed success.. mostly due to the fact that I can't decide whether to only submit when I am sure I have a great shot and therefore protect my average... or to just enter for the fun of it... and in some cases enter risky shots that might bomb or might do well...

Feedback:
Your image suffers a bit in technical execution. The on-camera (?) flash has caused harsh lighting on the foreground model and significant drop off to the back of the scene. (Which includes the challenge subject) - The idea is great and it looks like you had fun setting up and shooting, but unfortunately you will inevitably get lower marks because of the lighting. It would be very hard to properly light the scene without a studio lighting set.

I look forward to seeing more of your work...

Chris

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Ok, tell me already, what day is so important?

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by mbrutus2009:
This looked like a fun shot to do but I don't really seem to like the colors.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by neophyte:
Funny! bit too much flash though.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by bennettjamie:
I like the idea, it's funny.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by randoo53:
Funny! (and very true)

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
I like the expression on the face of the boy. Nice image. Post-it is given little less importance IMO.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by scooter97:
I can seriously emphasize with this message! Well done.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by k9logic:
Clever. Nice DOF.

The day most women can't forget, the day most men don't remember
by Chappie23

Comment by Ja-9:
your "man" looks way to young for your "woman"...hmmm Focus is off