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| 08/05/2009 07:29:23 PM |
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| 08/03/2009 06:09:47 PM |
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| 08/01/2009 12:13:01 PM |
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| 07/24/2009 06:35:28 PM |
Beijing in the eveningby shamblesComment by macrothing:
Critique Club Critique
First Impressions
Not getting a 'Street Photography' feel from this image. Comes across as a landmark/nightshot photograph more.
Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
After reading your comments that you were trying to get the feel of the Forbidden City area in the evening - I think you achieved that quite well, but without people in the scene, or streets visible, it is struggling as a contender in this Challenge. The image as is can't be modified to show these aspects either. Composition wise it is too centered for me and the angle of the building is pointing 'out' of frame so throws the visual balance out. The hedge dominates the frame too much as well, without being a 'feature'.
Comments, Score & Placement Review
79/135 and a score of 5.06 is quite good, considering the Challenge and the lack of a stronger street scene. I agree with the first comment.
Summary
Looks like more potential venturing up into the City than has been captured from this distant vantage point. Street photography in itself requires a certain 'boldness' - it is not for everyone. As is, perhaps tweaking the colors and lighting in pp may have given this more pop - but would still fall short of the Challenge. |
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| 07/18/2009 10:10:28 PM |
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| 07/15/2009 01:07:59 AM |
Beijing in the eveningby shamblesComment by AP: although taken from 'a' street, I don't see this as 'street photography', though the image is pleasing enough save for the slight lack of sharpness |
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| 07/11/2009 08:16:39 AM |
A little help crossing the streetby shamblesComment by bob350: Interesting capture of detail in something frequently looked at without really being seen. Calling attention to such parts of life is a good reason to make images. I never realized that the geometric shapes forming these figures are not always uniform dots. The mild distortion from shooting with the camera lower than the subject suggests a space ailien portrait. Including the last bit of heel in the lower corner might have been a minor improvement, but noticing the vibrance of transmitted instead of reflected light and acting on the impulse to capture is a photographic habit worthy of nurturing. |
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| 07/09/2009 11:07:12 AM |
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| 07/07/2009 10:38:43 PM |
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| 07/04/2009 01:04:28 PM |
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