Silky-Smooth Sunrise
by FairyWings

Comment by Judi:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Composition: I like the idea but I wonder if a landscape crop would have been kinder to this image and not chopped the image into three...ie..the trees & sky, the water above the chair, the water below the chair. It is good to work on thirds...but keep them blending together and not separate entities.

Technical: The colour is great...and the clarity of the chair and reflection. The horizon is probably straight but due to the shadowing over the water of the trees the eye keeps getting drawn to the uneven line that some would misconceive as the horizon level. Maybe a bit more light to show that area a bit more.

Overall: I think if you try a reshoot at the same time of the day and play around with the composition more...I think you will end up with a ribbon winner down the track.

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by Venom:
nice makeup on your face

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by samtrundle:
Very dramatic. I like it. 7...make that an 8.

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by bassbone:
very creepy image - and very well done - 9

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by Melethia:
I really don't like looking down the barrel of guns - it disturbs me. This may be, of course, your intent. Good intensity captured on your model.

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by riversong:
disturbing image, but well-executed.

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by liberty:
Very intense.9.

BulletHead
by FairyWings

Comment by Delta_6:
Like the b&w and the splatter on her face. 7

Silky-Smooth Sunrise
by FairyWings

Comment by egpieper:
Very good composition.

Silky-Smooth Sunrise
by FairyWings

Comment by skewsme:
Beautiful geometry and tones.