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| 07/03/2006 01:19:55 PM |
PuffCyclesby EvaanComment: It's an interesting subject. I feel like a different point of view should have been tried---something that would place the main subject in front of a less busy background. The spikyness of the main subject is competing with stalkiness of the background. |
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| 07/03/2006 01:18:02 PM |
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| 07/03/2006 01:16:31 PM |
...by drz01Comment: This is a cute girl with a sweet smile. The composition works but her skin tones look a bit flat to me. It looks a bit overexposed judging by the loss of textural detail in her shirt. |
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| 07/03/2006 01:12:18 PM |
Waveby RKTComment: I like the sharp focus on the eyelash and the simplicity of the composition. Although I think you had the right idea with this tight cropping of the frame, I'd like to see a bit more of the child's face and less of the t-shirt. |
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| 06/20/2006 05:14:41 PM |
Alone In The Cornerby asmithphotosComment: this photo doesn't give me much to think about or look at. These two objects don't evoke any kind of feeling or reaction in me at all. The lighting is good but only in the sense that it reveals the objects with clarity but not in a way that creates a mood of desolation or loneliness to me. |
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| 06/20/2006 05:11:08 PM |
Empty Park Benchby ElaineComment: Maybe if this were taken at a different time of day I would get the sense of desolation. A more dramatic point of view would also help. This scene is just peaceful to me---a nice view, dappled shade, and a nice seat. The fact that the bench is empty isn't enough to evoke a sense of desolation in me. |
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| 06/20/2006 05:09:02 PM |
Abandonedby Jaded_HousewifeComment: Intersting subject matter and qualifies as desolate. I'm not excited by this though. Maybe a more dramatic angle highlighting a segment of the building rather than this rather straightforward point of view? I think if there were some sort of figure in the foreground, a dog, or cat perhaps, or maybe some abandoned object, this view would work more for me. The expanse of patchy grass doesn't make enough of an impact to me. |
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| 06/20/2006 05:03:59 PM |
Moved Onby esdarbyComment: Interesting take on the challenge. It's a bit contrasty for me---I'd like to see more detail in the shadow areas. |
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| 06/20/2006 05:02:39 PM |
Desertedby jonrComment: Very nice. Subject matter has high interest and it qualifies as desolate. It looks a bit overly smooth in the shadow area to me. |
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| 06/20/2006 01:46:23 PM |
a face that she keeps in a jar by the doorby posthumousComment: Very disturbing and surreal. I didn't vote in, or enter, this challenge because of the possibile (and very likely) high-annoyance factor. But you managed a literal take on a lyric that didn't annoy me and turned out as good art. I like the flat collage quality. It's all so flat and almost non-photo like that I don't even care if that is a real reflection or an Nice work, Don! |
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