far above the world?
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by nomad469:
Impressive image - Well Done

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
What eyes! Pretty eyes make the sale with me. I also like the blowing hair.

A New Day, After the Fires
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by MG:
Great landscape shot!

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by Noel_ZH:
Just waiting for the rule of thirds critics to come in ;) Nice shot, could use a little more vibrance/saturation and color cast removal. 5

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by macrothing:
Perhaps a tighter crop (left and bottom) may have made this a stronger image. Good focus and nice expression. The pose is nice but I just noticed she has her fingers on the chords, yet the other hand is not playing, so perhaps relaxing that hand - but minor and, may have ended up too 'directed'.

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Needs more colour balancing... I'm not sure the white balance was good here. Lots of empty negative space to the left, not a very convincing composition. Why form a chord with the left hand if the right hand is posing for the camera? A bit of a mixed message there. Nice model, you've not flattered her ankle and you should generally aim not to see the bottom of the feet in a portrait. Have you come across rule of thirds? That will help you. Nice shallow dof, good bokeh.

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by C_Steve_G:
Your yellow background has more emphasis than your subject...

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by david_c:
ay, senorita! Juegame una cancion...del amor!

Barcelona Nights
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by DistantColours:
A good pose and camera angle. The background is too busy, though and the positioning in the frame is too centred. I think a closer crop would help. I can imagine the guitar almost filling the frame.

A New Day, After the Fires
by FellSevenLeaves

Comment by HeiSch:
I think having something in the forground would give the viewer a fixed point to hold on to. Your picture really lives off the lake and the triagular island in it.