Rise of the machines
by kepot

Comment by nlghttrain:
this looks like a snapshot to me, lighting needs to be worked on

Rise of the machines
by kepot

Comment by lynnmarie:
I like your idea. How about shooting this from a lower perspective? This would give the illusion that these are taller. I would also play with the colors a bit (maybe even completely desaturated) to give it more of a menacing appearance.

Sunset
by kepot

Comment by BAMartin:
Greetings from tyhe Critique Club.

This is a wonderful sunset photo, the colors are brilliant and range all the way from the darkest red to pale blue. You have captured alot of detail in the clouds.

The one thing that I wish I coulkd change is the lack if detail in the foreground. Setsets are beautiful things, but without some sense of place or feel for where it was taken, they pretty much become all the same. If I stare at the photograph lonf enougn I can see the horizon, but nothing at all below that. My personal choice would be to sacrifice a bit of the rich color of the sky to obtain more detail in the foreground.

For other situations like this, a half neutral density filter might just block some on th light on the top half of the photo, and alow mire light on the bpttom. I am jusy making an educated guess, but it might be worth playing with.

Good start, good day
by kepot

Comment by DocendoDiscimus:
you need to reduce the noise... nice colors

Staring eyes
by kepot

Comment by Citadel:
As the eyes are composed using the rule of thirds I would say that this really isn't a centered composition.