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Comment by nolamom:
I don't like the fence line in this picture. I think it would be better if the fence wasn't there.

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Comment by philup:
great fence lead! Nice job

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Comment by Rosacalaca:
Original

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Comment by JuliBoc:
Very close. I think the white balance was better on the original. Perhaps the keyboard is a different color, but the original has a brighter crisper look.

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Comment by mpeters:
Hopper will love you for ripping hime off ;) 8

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Comment by LN13:
The original is just a bit sharper and better lit shot than this one. Not that this is bad.

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Comment by CNovack:
Nice lighting, sharp details and good color tones on your emulation of the original. I really don't have much to add but I do have one suggestion on one element of the photo. Adjusting your lighting such that you catch a gleam in the diamond of the ring would increase visual interest for it would call more attention to that ring - not to mention add a subtely interesting ironic juxtaposition of spotlighting the beauty of the sparkling diamond paired with this negative message in the keyboard. Also the ring would look a bit more visually appealing if the surface was not so tarnished - although it does add a bit to the composition for you could say it is a subtle nod that this relationship has grown tarnished. Hmmm, boy I really didn't have that much to say as I look back;-)

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Comment by Judi:
Good work.

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Comment by annig:
ouch

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Comment by VitaminB:
Nicely done. Still one of my favourite shots on DPC.