Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by Ter:
very clever

Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by Donna21:
So because you included a keyboard, that makes this a legal shot?

Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by rjhawkin:
not even in focus for a simple shot.

Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by CaseyAllen:
I guess photographically this isn't a spectacular image, but very clever! 7/10

Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by Lumix:
clever. Of course, in 1975 memos were written on typewriters.

Memo from Turner
by willhale

Comment by mitähä:
LOL, I don't think the date of the memo and the keyboard design quite matches... An old typewriter would have done the picture...
Dimmed lights, a candle maybe...

Good idea though.
Some sharpening required.

A 4.

Rain Ripple
by willhale

Comment by willhale:
Thanks for all of your posts. You are all right it needs a lot of work. I was trying for some thing different but it didn't work. Just so you all know the big rock looking this is a drain pipe.

Rain Ripple
by willhale

Comment by ScotArt5:
That big grey rock on the left is distracting. Focus on the ripples.

Rain Ripple
by willhale

Comment by pcody:
Lets consider the things that have been framed here. The ripple, the grass and that big out-of-focus thing(I have no idea what it is) that is taking up 1/3 of the frame. What is it that you wanted the voters to see? The ripple. When composing, keep in mind that you want to limit the things in the frame to only what you want the viewer to see. Your score will be sure to improve.

Rain Ripple
by willhale

Comment by Drummerjd356:
boring.