bortukan
by shay455

Comment by seasaw:
interesting shot but no visible bokeh...

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by rdebruyn:
I don't see any bokeh here.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by Connor:
good shot

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by whitewolf:
Great photo! Nice colors and light.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by pedrobop:
The background is too dark and i would like to see her face...The light is very pleasing though.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by TCGuru:
Your lighting in this is really pretty. The bokeh does not lend itself to this photo. It is so dark that it almost disappears completely. Your model is not looking at the camera and because this is such a tight shot, it loses interest as we have no idea why you chose to capture her at this particular moment. If you had shot a little wider, perhaps we would see whatever she may be looking at as well.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by mikeee:
Might be my monitor, but I can't make out any detail in the background.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
First of all...where is the bokeh?

Secondly...why are you trying to make me care for the back side of someones head? I can care less for the curly hair. Hair has no emotional impact, no matter how you try.

The crop is off as well.

The only good thing in this image is the dof, the rim light off the face which I would of wanted to see more for the emotional value, and the key light kicking off the shoulder.

Not going to do so well in this challenge, especially on this web site.

Good luck, happy holidays.

bortukan
by shay455

Comment by albc28:
Not sure what the point of this photo was (not meant in a bad way). Your subject is looking away from teh camera, so all you see is the back of his/her head. You don't really show what they are looking at either.

field of Floral
by shay455

Comment by jay6850:
The on camera flash really detracted here due to that one flower in the front the completely grabs my attention. Maybe using a tripod and using a longer shutterspeed would have worked here. Then, the flowers may have been somewhat blurred, which I think would have also added to the picture.