Hungry Monarch
by jerryc12

Comment by noraneko:
Subject well focused and focal point: 1
Lighting: 1
Composition: 1
Background: 1
First impression/ Wow factor: 1
Total: 5

Hungry Monarch
by jerryc12

Comment by aguillory:
Very nice, but a little too much little on the left

Train Art
by jerryc12

Comment by briantammy:
nice aspect of train life. good shot

Train Art
by jerryc12

Comment by mist:
Not art in my opinion, just vandelism. Tagging is the lowest form of grafitti.

Train Art
by jerryc12

Comment by cogerox:
This is a little flat.

Train Art
by jerryc12

Comment by Melethia:
Meets the challenge and I like the rust on the bolts and the long shadows. A bit lacking in depth/perspective because of the head-on shot, though.

Train Art
by jerryc12

Comment by w4jzz:
Can't tell that this is part of a train. It really needs to show more.

Cabbage green matter
by jerryc12

Comment by graphicfunk:
Congratulations on your top 20 finish.

Cabbage green matter
by jerryc12

Comment by Neuferland:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

What an interesting shot. I'm not a big fan of abstract, okay, scratch that, the truth is that I usually just don't get it but I like this. I like the patterns, the lines, the way light on the subject, natural is always the way to go, heh?

What bothered me about it and I would have subtracted a point is the noise or patterns that show up in the green areas. I guess it all goes with the abstract idea but like I said, I never did get abstract, probably why I didn't vote on it, LOL

The only other thing I noticed was the upper left corner, that black area is a bit distracting. Other than that it's a wonderful shot and you did a great job!

I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!

Deannda

Cabbage green matter
by jerryc12

Comment by posthumous:
I like the stair effect. 7