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Comment by JerseyGenie:
Hi, I really like the POV and especially the lovely stridations on the lovely posey.

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Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Ooh, very pretty! Lovely capture, with the sun just setting behind the hill.

Improvement suggestions:
At the moment, the composition looks a bit confusing - it's almost centered, but not quite. I don't think a centered composition would work too well, because the silhouettes are asymmetrical. Instead I'd be tempted to crop off some of the left side of the picture, and maybe a bit of the top of the sky as well, to make this into a proper off-centre subject composition.
Also, the top part of the sky is pretty, but a bit subdued compared to the rest of the image. If you want the image to really jump out towards people, you could do a hue/sat adjustment and just increase the saturation of yellow colour. It makes the image ridiculously warm, but also really makes it pop out towards people.

Shur-ly you're Joking?
by liltritter

Comment by kea:
The shot is to cluttered, made the eye wander all over it, looking for the main object.

Shur-ly you're Joking?
by liltritter

Comment by glad2badad:
This is a bit too contrived (setup) IMO and the number of "props" is excessive. You're also way too neat (look at those bundled cords!). :) Good luck.

Shur-ly you're Joking?
by liltritter

Comment by Citadel:
I think you have provided too many props to get your point across. It gives this a bit of a cluttered feel to it.

I do like the idea however. (Nice approach)

Perhaps a different angle for the laptop would help as well.

Shur-ly you're Joking?
by liltritter

Comment by RainMotorsports:
Similar thought to myne!

Shur-ly you're Joking?
by liltritter

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
I don't care for the drop shadow.

weird.jpg
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Comment by JuliBoc:
The processing is kind of fun, and I like the subject. I don't like the composition much -- the background is too distracting. As long as you are "over-processing" it, why don't you try blurring the background and cranking up the saturation and contrast on the red vehicle.

weird.jpg
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Comment by NikonJeb:
I like this a lot! The processing is supported nicely by the raw gritty powerful subject and the starkness of the shot is quite good!

weird.jpg
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Comment by raish:
Yes. Alien buggy in alien landscape. It's not s soft light theme.