High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
by gotthoffnung

Comment by DemonLlama:
Not sure how the meets the challenge of "Single Light Source"

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by blackenedwhite:
DNMC. Sorry.

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by bibimartin:
this is not artifical light, but it's a nice photo!

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by k4ffy:
if you're shooting using sunlight, and also doing a flash fill, that isn't a single light source. going to have to say DNMC here.

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by omikeo:
dnmc?

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by BrianR:
Appeares to be more than one light source

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by hardkrash:
May be flash fill but dang nabit, that sun is helping too much...

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
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Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Counting the fill flash, at least two light sources here.

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Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Very ole worldy. kinda a cool concept.

Composition:
A little more cropping on the right would have moved the little girl into the thirds line nicely and not detracted from the shot. The hill creates a lovely leading line for the eye to follow.

Subject:
Well the title meets the challenge ... but i am not sure the picture could stand on its own.

Technical (Colour and light):
lovely sepia tonings and natural light. The picture is a little soft focus on the kids though.

To grow its vote?:
There are a couple of things ... crop tightly on the kids to include less of the shed but have it peeking at the right of the shot ... this would have created a focus on the kids and their holding of the bible.

Also think about how the shot stands without the title itself.

Summary:
Good shot .. and lovely image well done.

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Cheers

Kari

High Desert Meadow at Sunset (with flash fill)
by gotthoffnung

Comment by h2:
dnmc because the main light source is not artificial (as you say, it's only FILL flash)