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of yesteryear
01/06/2003 08:59:36 PM
of yesteryear
by BJ

Comment by jimmsp:
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) – I really like the engine as the focus of the photo. I might have liked to have seen a little more of the front of the engine, including smoke stack and cow catcher.
(2) BACKGROUND – While out of your control, I don’t care for the background in the upper quarter of the photo. And I really can’t tell if the brown object (top, left center) is part of the engine or in the background. Finally, the red sheet should have been straightened and smoothed.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – Very good use of DOF; very good lighting.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL – I have no recommendations.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – A good photo; clearly meets challenge. I scored it a little better than your average score. I think the red sheet was probably the primary detractor here, though out of your control. Too bad you couldn’t have hung a blue sheet behind the whole engine to clean up the entire background.

Jim msp
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of yesteryear
01/05/2003 01:06:07 AM
of yesteryear
by BJ

Comment by nathaliedoo:
Too bad we're missing the back of the train.....
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of yesteryear
01/02/2003 06:25:41 PM
of yesteryear
by BJ

Comment by Diana:
Great photo , but setting on the red wasnt a good idea --7
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of yesteryear
12/31/2002 08:31:20 AM
of yesteryear
by BJ

Comment by catpixel:
could use more lighting.
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of yesteryear
12/30/2002 11:10:23 PM
of yesteryear
by BJ

Comment by rcrawford:
Looks like a flash photo. I think it would look better in natural light. Try using the light from an open window and a tripod if it's still too dark. I think you will like it.
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Edible "Neon" 4
12/24/2002 09:05:50 PM
Edible "Neon" 4
by BJ

Comment by mcrael:
Huh! I was so focused on the objects that I almost overlooked the way that they were arranged. Good concept, but focus is too soft. Too bad about the lit spot in the bottom left corner too.
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Edible "Neon" 4
12/24/2002 03:22:31 PM
Edible "Neon" 4
by BJ

Comment by Diana:
ok now i see your 4 took me a while i kept counting 9 lol lol cleaver (8)
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