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Comment by Arachnophilia:
are thoe stairs it's on? they could use a little definition. different lighting, maybe. 6

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Comment by artemis8:
There's a little too much negative space in this photo for my taste. I would have preferred a closer shot. I wonder if it would have been more interesting if you had put a blue ball or something round in the silly putty as if it were a yolk.

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Comment by RiderGal:
Silly Putty! I love this stuff... boy, you certainly got a lot of blue in this picture...I think it would have been better if you would have gotten closer to the subject, and put it offcenter. Also I think it was a little bit of overkill to put it on a blue rug. Maybe you could have tried for a different angle, not just a straight on shot. Keep trying!

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Comment by vestanpance:
Light is uneven across shot. Subject isn't big enough in frame. Background has too much texture. Nice clarity, colour and definition.