View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by oterodesign:
blurry

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by photobuddy:
its a nice image...but lacks clarity...Out of focus or some camera shake.

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by smardaz:
neat perspective

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by dcanossa:
this is pretty blurry

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by signal2noise:
The black areas hurt this image - without definition, there is very little interest from the eye.

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by jeger:
Could be a little sharper.

View from California St.
by photochild405

Comment by IAmMoen:
my attention is not drawn anywhere

Put your money where your mouth is
by photochild405

Comment by JamesA:
Fit

Figure Eight
by photochild405

Comment by geoffb:
Hi from the Critique Club,

This shot has great timing and good composition, but unfortunately the actual shot doesn't appear to be planned out very well. Although the trees behind the bubbles provide a good backdrop, they are much too dark and only serve to prove that this shot is quite underexposed. The shot is exposed for the sky, which takes up only a small portion of this image, and creates way too much contrast.

In addition, there is a huge lens flare in the upper left and lower right regions of the image. Although lens flares can be effective, this one appears accidental, and detracts from the subject (the bubbles).

Great timing and composition of the shot. For the future, planning the shot out a bit more (i.e. considering the scene) will improve your score drastically. You clearly have the creativity to produce great shots.

Regards,
Geoff Ball

Figure Eight
by photochild405

Comment by tosk:
The bubbles do not seem prominent enough and there's a lens flare to the left.