Roundness of Toilet Paperby
MochaNova1987Comment by ladyhawk22: [ I]::: Critique Club :::[/i] ladyhawk22
First Impression - the most important one: Definite solid shapes here, though there are a couple of things that need some work.
Composition: Composition of this photo is ok. You have one roll in the lower left and another partial roll in the upper right, which helps to lead the eye all the way through the photo.
Subject: You've chosen a subject that has a strong shape to it, making it a decent choice for this challenge.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): The colors here look pretty good, though I think they could have been enhanced even more by some extra lighting. The focus here seems to be zoning in more on the wood in the background than the rolls of paper.
To grow its vote?: To enhance this photo a little more, I would suggest making sure that the focus and DOF really shows off the subject of the photo. A little more light to help overcome the shadows might be good too, and may bring out some interesting colors and patterns in the wood of the background.
Summary: Good choice of shape, and with a couple of small changes I think you'd be on the right track!
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