Do I Need Glasses?by
777STANComment by Gatorguy: Hi, Critique Club here...
I think this is a really fun image and one that will take it's place well in the family album. I love the glasses.
I think there are a few problems that resulted in the lower score.
1) It has a very snap shot type feel to it. Not that there is anything wrong with that, but for a free study, it won't do well right out of the shoot.
2) There is a fair about noise in the image.
3) Her face is a bit dirty (sand or something)
4) The strong lines in the background are not good (for a higher score that is)
5) Her expression is rather odd. Once again, ok for a snapshot, not for a free study.
The devil is always in the details for these challenges.
Just one person's opinions so take it with a grain of salt.