Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by nlghttrain:
Lighting needs to be workd on,

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by jjstager2:
I have no idea what I am looking at. The colors are neutral. The composition is somewhat simple. What's going on, here?

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by Lactobeezor:
Great concept

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by lynnmarie:
Good idea! To improve this (IMO): use a more uniform bg and get closer to your subject as I think that the glare on the glass distracts.

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by jonfrommk:
Really nice idea and yep it does science for me bit of a shame about the glare on the glass but nice bokeh

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by wrex:
A cleaner glass or some spot cloning would definitely improve the image.

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by bigdipper:
Simple science, but well done.

Convex Meniscus
by kfeher

Comment by klstover:
Yaaaaaaaaaaay. Awesome abstract, and it does too meet the challenge! ;-D

Bowling Elements
by kfeher

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

First off, congrats on a new top score. It's always nice to have a new image sitting there at the front.

Camera Work/Technical: I am pretty sure that the hand and ball are in focus here, but it is really difficult to find the main area of focus. I think this may be because of your lighting.

Lighting: Your subject is a bit too dark. I'd like to see some fill flash added in there to really make that ball and hand pop.

Composition/Content: Well-done. I like the action that you captured here using your composition.

My Opinion: Adding a little more light on your subject would have really helped bring this one to life. As it is, finding your focus is a bit tough.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

edit because I clicked the submit button too fast.

Message edited by author 2007-05-17 04:41:31.

Bowling Elements
by kfeher

Comment by Inside:
Great idea, but need more focus and sharpness on the hand and ball