Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by dunnewold:
Wow.
I guess I figured out how to get a lot of comments. Scan the contest guidlines once. Then forget everything except the contest title.

The comments about no object did get annoying, but as far as each person knew, he/she was the first to notice. So guess what! Everyone gets marked helpful!

Special thanks to the ones that mentioned something besides forgetting my object.

-Luke

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
I used to live in Nashville. I know that people can read there. Your pix had so much potential, but you forgot to do one thing, right??

The midtones are ok in this b&w, the windows are way overblown, the blacks are too deep. Pure blacks and whites 'must' have texture to be convinceing. Nice lighting, nice lines, comp ok could be better.

Don't give up, try again. Next time re-read the challenge rules.

Good luck.

Message edited by author 2006-06-12 07:15:39.

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by B74A:
Too empty?

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by SherwinJames:
Great feeling of emptiness. Good use of lighting.

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by TooCool:
What did you bring into this room?
TC

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by scrum8:
I think I would have cropped horizontally and eliminated the ceiling.

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by rick13601:
What did you bring into this room with your camera? Take one thing and your camera into an empty room and photograph it.

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by dolphnz8:
Like the angle of this...looking for the one thing you put in here

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by Melethia:
Like the composition - this is a very nice shot of an "under construction" building - conveys a sense of emptiness and "not quite there" well.

Under Construction
by dunnewold

Comment by Judi:
Awesome place for photos.