Birth of a Flower
by cnobre

Comment by mcrael:
Focus is too soft overall, which cause loss of texture in the petals.

Out of paper...
by cnobre

Comment by crabappl3:
Critique Club Comment:

A nice idea. Your layout and the tech look of the writing is pleasing to the eye. I do feel that the lighting or white balance may be off some. An adjustment in post processing for this as well as an unmask sharpen would help the white towel jump out at the viewer more. I like the texture in the clip and wood of the board.

Compositionally I feel this is a strong picture, some minor post processing work and this picture would stand strong.

-danny

Birth of a Flower
by cnobre

Comment by Becky:
I like the green and white contrast.I also like the light and dark contrast.

Birth of a Flower
by cnobre

Comment by JamieWillmott:
I like the DOF used but I think the composition is a little too central for my taste.

Birth of a Flower
by cnobre

Comment by Silver Fox:
You've tried to come up with a nice photograph, and the background fits in with the white flower, but to me, the flower seems like it is slightly out of focus. Instead of having it centred, perhaps a bit to the left or to the right would be more suitable?

Birth of a Flower
by cnobre

Comment by thatguy:
nice image. the white of the flower works well with the grenn background of the plants.

Out of paper...
by cnobre

Comment by Cjorgy2oo4:
right idea.. but not very good lighting.

Out of paper...
by cnobre

Comment by Becky:
I like the clipboard idea. The color contrast is nice.

Out of paper...
by cnobre

Comment by Amiee:
This picture looks very cool! I can see the image of a square on the paper, although the tilted angle seems a bit disturbing. The lines that are created by the pen and the drawing of the square causes the photo to look very abstract.

Out of paper...
by cnobre

Comment by PaulMdx:
Composition: Good
Technical: Nice colour/focus
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Simple but effective. 7