Always turned on
by jpfrandano

Comment by MG:
Really like the diagonal shoreline, waves and haze in the background. The red and blue dots are a nice touch. Choice of crop works perfectly. Should do great! Good luck at roll-over!

Spring Bikes
by jpfrandano

Comment by AC:
I love the line up, the colors, the shot. It can be seen that you have a great eye for photography. The only problem(s) I see that could hurt your final score are the slight overexposed areas/wash outs on some of the bicycles front tire guard and handle bars. But I love the depth of field, and the focus is great. Good luck and well done.

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by jpfrandano

Comment by ephln:
Nice and crisp. She has a great smile. Maybe clone out the one hair on the right side?

Last Day of Summer
by jpfrandano

Comment by abranton:
I am not very experienced but I think the body is in focus quite a bit more than the face. I would like to see all or none on the girl. Other than that..very cute expression and sweet pic. Good job!

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by jpfrandano

Comment by Node:
Hey nice shot, nice model she is very relaxed and has a great smile.

Now what would I change, well unlike the others i don't really like the background door especially the hinge on the RH side, the texture of the door could be great and if you moved your model a pace or two forward from the door the background would become OOF and soften. The lighting is just not enough on her LH side as we look at it as her eye is blending with the eye socket area, you could try using some sort of reflector (White sheet of cardboard or I like those twisty silver car sun protectors) to bounce some of the light back. Hope this helps.

The grass is falling!!!
by jpfrandano

Comment by Donna21:
If you had rotated this 180 deg, I would have scored it higher (and the title would make more sense to me - becasue it would have been our viewpoint, too, not just hers).

The grass is falling!!!
by jpfrandano

Comment by DistantColours:
If you had rotated this image I'd have given it very high marks.

Deep Reflection
by jpfrandano

Comment by roz:
omg .. i absolutely love this photograph .... the water glowing like it is with that gorgeous silhouette of that grass stuff & the colours ... just beautiful ..... =8

Study of fruit
by jpfrandano

Comment by Ann:
I like the interesting shadows, although overall, the lighting is a bit harsh.

Study of fruit
by jpfrandano

Comment by AdiGri:
The shadows are too harsh, the background too green...