DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Browse Settings
Currently viewing:
Registered Usersoeren

Show comments:

Per page:

Order:

Comments:


Comments Received by soeren
Pages:   ...
Showing 1 - 10 of ~110
Image Comment
blackberry leaf
06/10/2012 07:58:29 PM
blackberry leaf
by soeren

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Yes, there is a lovely atmosphere here, but it needs a little more. Atmosphere alone cannot carry a shot, it can only add to one that is already good. The composition is basic but good, though you really don't need that oof leaf in the top right to draw attention away from the nice jagged edges you have going. Any item that draws the eye away from your focal point will automatically weaken it, especially here.

Might I also suggest that you invest in a tripod, even the most basic model will suit you fine for now. Your settings suggest a handheld shot, and a tripod would allow you to set a deeper dof and longer exposure...not to mention stability! Though there is no evident camerashake here, you shot fairly fast with a high ISO for a macro.

Hope this critique has been of help. Feel free to PM me with any questions or comments.

Susan
Photographer found comment helpful.
blackberry leaf
06/05/2012 10:50:34 PM
blackberry leaf
by soeren

Comment by flaherma:
Lovely colors (subject & BG).
Photographer found comment helpful.
blackberry leaf
06/05/2012 06:25:25 PM
blackberry leaf
by soeren

Comment by nam:
Decided to try to comment on my middle of the road votes this time. The focus on that centered triangle of leaf just above the mid point horizontally is excellent. Wish the bottom was as sharp and more importantly I find the upper right corner very distracting. I don't often use a square crop but here's an image I would consider one for; lose the right third and a bit off the top and see what you think.
Photographer found comment helpful.
blackberry leaf
06/04/2012 05:34:04 AM
blackberry leaf
by soeren

Comment by Abra:
Nice effect of shallow DoF but I feel it could be a bit lighter
Photographer found comment helpful.
blackberry leaf
05/30/2012 02:28:18 AM
blackberry leaf
by soeren

Comment by Ammie:
Oh lovely. Drops are great and the different colours, lovely 8
Photographer found comment helpful.
red bottle
11/19/2008 02:26:20 AM
red bottle
by soeren

Comment by chromeydome:
677021.jpgPostLuminous Award Nominee!
surreal, almost abstract--nice use of saturation and grain to achieve an alternate reality effect
Photographer found comment helpful.
red bottle
11/16/2008 03:55:59 AM
red bottle
by soeren

Comment by WeJay:
Good spotting!
A bit oversaturated!
Photographer found comment helpful.
red bottle
11/15/2008 04:21:04 PM
red bottle
by soeren

Comment by Daybis:
Interesting, some parts seem a little over and under exposed at the same time.
Photographer found comment helpful.
red bottle
11/13/2008 08:58:32 PM
red bottle
by soeren

Comment by kaiser_chief:
Noise is a problem here that detracts from the image. Also, some fill light to light the rest of the bottle would have helped
Photographer found comment helpful.
red bottle
11/13/2008 12:07:19 AM
red bottle
by soeren

Comment by Balko:
Meets Challenge 2
Technicalities 2
Interestingness 2
Out of the Box 1
Personal Bias 1
Total = 8
Photographer found comment helpful.
Pages:   ...
Showing 1 - 10 of ~110


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2019 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Proudly hosted by Sargasso Networks. Current Server Time: 04/24/2019 07:49:56 AM EDT.