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| 09/10/2005 10:48:15 AM |
A tree red branchby maxlevayComment: Too closely cropped and poorly positioned losing most of your subject off frame causing a poor composition. The desat picks out the red colour, but seems excessive (just for the sake of using it) and the branch would probably stand out well on it's own anyway since it's quite a striking red. The focus is terrible as well, considering the red branch is the only thing you want focused it's just plain sloppy to lose most of it. |
| 09/10/2005 10:44:22 AM |
Dieing branchby pkarkareComment: It's spelt dying. Despite this, the shot is uninteresting, the close crop and short DOF don't seem to serve any purpose. Anything at all on the twig to break the monotony of the line would have helped: an insect, a bird... anything, and it needn't even be in the foreground and in focus. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:37:17 AM |
Ninja Princessby JutildaComment: Before I read the title I thought this was a clever analogy to the branch of the children of Abraham, with the Hijab on the model. Pity because it's much stronger than a ninja?!?! holding a twig. Where's the connection?
Badly focused as well. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:32:46 AM |
Branch: Bearer of Good Timesby johansecComment: Seems very dark, (maybe adjust your WB for cloudy conditions), and this causes the white rope to stand out and rob all the attention. A more muted colour than white would help. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:29:41 AM |
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| 09/10/2005 10:26:10 AM |
Among Themby DottieDComment: The badly focused branch in the foreground is distracting, but nice scale and idea. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:23:04 AM |
Complicated Natureby homensComment: Nothing to break the pattern or focus the eye on, and the twig in the foreground should be removed. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:22:13 AM |
The branch that feedsby cabaComment: A good find, and I like the contrasts and fluid forms, but the focus doesn't lead the eye anywhere. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:20:25 AM |
Dead Branch Driftingby ShecoyaComment: Out of focus, and the skewed line of the river bank bang in the centre makes for a poor composition. |
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| 09/10/2005 10:19:06 AM |
A Bat, Branch Dancer.by BrianRComment: The bat is the subject here, and the branch seems to be nothing more than a prop. The post production effects look to be used purely for the sake of using effects too. |
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