Fertig
by jgm5015

Comment by bergiekat:
I like the color tone here. The post behind the second model is distracting. Perhaps placing the model closer to the post so as to hide it.

Fertig
by jgm5015

Comment by Mephisto:
...oder eher "flasche leer" ;)
cool street portrait, i love the toning and the way you included the surroundings and background! 8

Fertig
by jgm5015

Comment by bubeltrubel:
like the german title!

Fertig
by jgm5015

Comment by twade1:
Awesome composition and great lighting. I find this to be a very interesting photo

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by Haneck:
I really like your post-editing here... But I might suggest trying to get a little more of an interesting composition going here. But the color tones are beautiful. I like it!

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by glad2badad:
Feels slightly off balance to me. It's the overall composition that feels off. The focal point appears to be the browning, curled leaf and the lighter area of the image near the top center. The focal point is high and centered.

Negative space is good, but seems to take more room than needed. The horizontal line formed by the leaves works well but nearly bisects the image into two parts.

I really want to see the top of that brown leaf! :) I almost feel like you could have backed off a little and maybe taken a bit off the right.

The colors, tone, texture, and DOF are all very nice here. The border is semi-transparent and is a minor distraction for the detail oriented. :P

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by m2iw:
good use of DoF/bokeh to add feel and depth to the shot.

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by bergiekat:
Fabulous colors!! Very interesting. 8

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by Ice-Tea-1983:
Good composition ... and it fits within the challenge ... it feels rather depressing, though ... 8

Not a Breeze
by jgm5015

Comment by SAhmed1022:
awesome detail and very nice flow/neg space... 10 :-)