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Beer Bubbles
09/25/2005 09:22:46 PM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by LucidLotus:
Certainly foamy and bubbly. The lighting is okay (some detail loss there) and the focus is decent. The composition however really brings the potential of this image down. The background used is uninspired and makes me as the viewer think "snapshot". I would recommend a single colored cloth to help isolate the focus of the image - black would be good ONLY if you decided to use the lighting to its advantage and play off the amber colors of the beer. If you're mostly wanting to highlight the foam, I'd say a much tighter crop so only a part of the glass was showing and lighting.. maybe from a bottom up sort of direction? Not sure how that'd look in practice. Also the subject being so centered is a bit boring, maybe create some negative space and more interest by pushing it to the left or right, so only half the glass is showing. Might be an idea. I gave a 4.
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Beer Bubbles
09/25/2005 08:52:43 PM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by Tammer:
For me, I find photos more appealing when the main subject is slightly off-centered or taken from a different angle. Maybe a bit tighter focus on the glass. I like your idea though - keep going :-)
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Beer Bubbles
09/22/2005 06:15:19 PM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by Dseale:
The lighting is unfortunate
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Beer Bubbles
09/21/2005 09:35:54 PM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by TeeQ:
I keep wanted to look at the beer and not the bubbles... looks yummy!!
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Beer Bubbles
09/21/2005 07:26:14 PM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by Elaine:
I would like this better against a solid background
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Beer Bubbles
09/21/2005 07:32:06 AM
Beer Bubbles
by smjbmw

Comment by Jaimeson:
I think that this could have been a stronger image if all the background was black. I do like your composition though.
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Female Woody Nude Pose
08/28/2005 09:01:54 PM
Female Woody Nude Pose
by smjbmw

Comment by OdysseyF22:
She looks purple to me...I suppose it could be my screen, but you might want to check on your colors.
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Female Woody Nude Pose
08/28/2005 06:50:16 AM
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Female Woody Nude Pose
08/28/2005 04:41:28 AM
Female Woody Nude Pose
by smjbmw

Comment by metoecus:
Your model looks a little stiff; you should try to get her to relax a bit more. The crop is a little bit too close for my liking, and the white stripe along the left side looks like a gap created by rotating the picture slightly after you cropped it.
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Female Woody Nude Pose
08/27/2005 11:09:02 PM
Female Woody Nude Pose
by smjbmw

Comment by lawyerdude666:
Great take on the contest theme.
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