angel by the light
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Comment by lenox114:
could be lighter

angel by the light
by dockie

Comment by raish:
This meets the challenge - inanimate and arranged.

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Comment by dockie:

Originally posted by timfythetoo: Greetings from the Critique Club - At first glance I had a hrad time figuring out what I was looking at. Upon realizing what it is I see that you have a cool angle on this stairwell. The rotation works really well to make me wonder. Beyond that I think my biggest issue with this shot is the focus. This may be a result of the image not being the maximum size the site allows. A loss of 160 pixels can make a huge difference on the focus of the shot. THere is a tutorial somewhere on this site on how to Save for Web that would give you thebest bang per buck on pixels for challenge entries. Your lines, lighting and shadows all work good on this shot. The geometric perspective is cool and fits the challenge. Either more crop on the right or less on theleft would have brought the shot more into balance. Abit too much dead space on the right compared to the left. Hope these help. Congrats ona personal best and I hope you see many more. Tim

thanks tim!

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Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

At first glance I had a hrad time figuring out what I was looking at. Upon realizing what it is I see that you have a cool angle on this stairwell. The rotation works really well to make me wonder.

Beyond that I think my biggest issue with this shot is the focus. This may be a result of the image not being the maximum size the site allows. A loss of 160 pixels can make a huge difference on the focus of the shot. THere is a tutorial somewhere on this site on how to Save for Web that would give you thebest bang per buck on pixels for challenge entries.

Your lines, lighting and shadows all work good on this shot. The geometric perspective is cool and fits the challenge. Either more crop on the right or less on theleft would have brought the shot more into balance. Abit too much dead space on the right compared to the left.

Hope these help. Congrats ona personal best and I hope you see many more.

Tim

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Comment by arngrimur:
Interesting geometry

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Comment by Nullix:
Nice and simple. I like it.

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Comment by Tim:
I really like the photo but its quite hard to give it a good score when its smaller than all the other photos

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Comment by DefyTime:
Nice light and exposure

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Comment by scotthadl:
Very abstract not sure what I am looking at perhaps to centered for me.

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Comment by IreneM:
Very well done. Love the lighting and colour.