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Senior Portrait
04/17/2006 09:26:12 AM
Senior Portrait
by PhotoRyno

Comment:
Top of the head is a bit dark... try using a hair light next time to get more contrast between hair and background
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Killing Me Softly
04/17/2006 09:25:13 AM
Killing Me Softly
by ShannonLee

Comment:
Over processed and a bit too soft for me
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04/17/2006 09:24:45 AM
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by manic35

Comment:
There are a few dark spots on your background which you should have cloned out (top left and left of the models face). Also I think if the model had turned her head and look more towards the camera it would have more impact since her hair is hiding most of her face. Nice sharp focus though.
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Make A Joyful Noise
04/17/2006 09:23:08 AM
Make A Joyful Noise
by ladyhawk22

Comment:
White balance is off... too much yellow saturated in the skin tones in an already yellow dominated pic (shirt and guitar)
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Soft Light Portraiture
04/17/2006 09:21:53 AM
Soft Light Portraiture
by chalice

Comment:
Looks like you missed the focus. Focus seems to be on the statue below the arms rather than on the eyes of the subject
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Kayle
04/17/2006 09:20:36 AM
Kayle
by fordmanf1

Comment:
Too much empty space on the bottom. A littl fill light to brigten up under the window would have helped a bit too.
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The One of my Dreams
04/17/2006 09:19:04 AM
The One of my Dreams
by Kivet

Comment:
I like the soft feel to this picture, but the un-eveness of the eyes is the first thing that draws my attention. One of them is a bit darker and also not fuly opened
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Untitled
04/17/2006 09:17:37 AM
Untitled
by hopelessoptimist

Comment:
Looks a bit under exposed.
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Spicing things up
04/17/2006 09:16:23 AM
Spicing things up
by tyrkinn

Comment:
White balance seems a bit to the yellow side and the painting in the background is crooked. A little bit of mood lighting rather than just full on, would have made this picture pop a bit more.
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Ms. Perfect Smile
04/17/2006 08:24:30 AM
Ms. Perfect Smile
by thegrandwazoo

Comment:
Over processed... espeically around the eyes and eye lashes.
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