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Spicing things up
04/17/2006 09:16:23 AM
Spicing things up
by tyrkinn

Comment:
White balance seems a bit to the yellow side and the painting in the background is crooked. A little bit of mood lighting rather than just full on, would have made this picture pop a bit more.
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Ms. Perfect Smile
04/17/2006 08:24:30 AM
Ms. Perfect Smile
by thegrandwazoo

Comment:
Over processed... espeically around the eyes and eye lashes.
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Become immortal
04/17/2006 08:22:37 AM
Become immortal
by steinar

Comment:
Eye glasses need to be tilted down just a little bit to get rid of the light glare, but other than that great photo. -9-
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Silence
04/17/2006 08:21:06 AM
Silence
by Ennil

Comment:
EYe make-up applied un-evenly. Looks almost like a black eye (espeically on the left side)
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Are you being served?
04/17/2006 08:16:53 AM
Are you being served?
by Majanka

Comment:
Nice angle and use of negative space. -8-
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Valerie
04/17/2006 08:16:32 AM
Valerie
by love

Comment:
Focus is off
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Michelle
04/17/2006 08:16:03 AM
Michelle
by Pedro

Comment:
Great model, great look and love the use of wind in her hair. However the blue eye makeup is really not working for me. I would have either gone a bit softer with it or over the top and made it more pronounced. Right now it is just kinda distracting and appears un-even. -8-
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First Posing Session
04/17/2006 08:14:04 AM
First Posing Session
by olddj

Comment:
Dark shirt and dark background do not work well in this pic. Also use of a hair light would have brightened the top of her head creating a more even look.
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"Amanda'
04/17/2006 08:09:24 AM
"Amanda'
by tfarrell23

Comment:
Looks over processed. Eyes are very unatural looking being blue instead of white
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Dress for Success
04/17/2006 08:05:54 AM
Dress for Success
by aaronb532

Comment:
I think this would have more impact if the subject was not centered. Cropping a bit of his left shoulder off and putting him into thirds may make this pic pop a bit more.
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