tree1.jpg
by Jewellian

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
I like this a lot. The tree just seems to explode out from the center of the image! That's a grand tree.

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by Lorene:
Very neat! Wonder how you did the fire effect. The water looks nice and crisp; it makes me thirsty!

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by escapetooz:
Interesting abstract!

Rainbow
by Jewellian

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

These pencil shots are always interesting because they can be done so many different ways.

You selected a symetrical composition, and it almost works. I think if the bottom three pencils were in exact alignment with the upper group it would have helped and also, if all the tips were sharpened to the same degree. The camera records every little detail, so all these little things count! Finally, I think it would have also been nice if the bottom three leads were in color, as well. But all that said, you have a very nice clean image here and it presents well.

It looks as if you are enjoying your experience at DPC and I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice and crisp - Composition need work and the flame could have been a little stronger.

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by JulieG:
This is clever. Maybe a darker background would have made the flames show up a bit more. I'm not sure about the out of focus water line and maybe even the water on the left could be cropped out. Just my opinion of course. You did a good job freezing the motion of the water.

goat-trio.jpg
by Jewellian

Comment by BAMartin:
LOL, absolutley the cutest thing ever!

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by lovethelight:
HOW?! that's cool

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by Chinarosepetal:
Very interesting capture:)

Firewater
by Jewellian

Comment by daboardergirl:
Interesting photo. I love the composition. Wondering how you did this.... Hand sanitizer? Haha! Ignore me. :) 6