DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Browse Settings
Currently viewing:
Registered Userjperez1690

Show comments:

Per page:

Order:

Comments:


Comments Made by jperez1690
Pages:  
Showing 31 - 39 of ~39
Image Comment
Death Becomes an Evergreen
03/31/2004 05:40:04 PM
Death Becomes an Evergreen
by Katspetkat

Comment:
Bark beetles are ravaging the forests in our neck of the woods too. You've managed to capture a beautiful shot in what might normally be viewed as an eyesore. The detail and color are great. The muted orange over the saturated blue is excellent. Composition is very pleasing, although I feel like I want to see a more distinct focal point. Except I'm having trouble pinning down what you could've done different with your angle without ruining what you've already got. (7)
Photographer found comment helpful.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
03/31/2004 03:57:09 PM
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
by GOLNAZZZ

Comment:
The 'nude' category got me chuckling. The orange has indeed been laid bare, albeit with a heavy blur to avoid offending the censors. Had to mark down because it is an orange after all, and the blur was done pretty bluntly. For some reason though, that same blur made it look really delicious, so I didn't mark it down all the way. (have to give credit for eliciting the gut reaction)
Photographer found comment helpful.
Waiter, There's a fly in my soup!
03/25/2004 01:32:30 PM
Waiter, There's a fly in my soup!
by Prof_Fate

Comment:
Heheh, I hate when that happens. Nice idea. The orange on the purple and ivory tablecloth is a good color choice. But the photo comes across more like a snapshot to me. I think trying to get a sharper focus would be one thing that would help. Another thing might be trying some different angles or arrangements of the utensils so that it's less of a documentary shot and has a little more drama (arg, I hate drama, but in a photo I think it's fun). Maybe a lower angle where you're beginning to peer into the bowl and the fly carcass is just in view over the rim and the spoon is angled so it leads your eye to the fly, or something like that. Just a thought. Thanks for the chuckle and momentary grossout :)
Photographer found comment helpful.
Death by Produce
03/25/2004 11:37:53 AM
Death by Produce
by movieman

Comment:
This is hilarious. Oh man, the sliver of carrot peeking out of the nose...
Nice job. Good composition and lighting. I also like the darker, soft backdrop of spilled carrot framing the scene from the left.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Reflections
03/24/2004 07:45:26 PM
Reflections
by flip89

Comment:
This has a really cool Mondrian style to it. The blue sky and almost-neutral bottom windows are a great fit against the orange. I think it would be interesting to see what this would look if you took a shot from further away and zoomed back in so that the perspective isn't as strong. Just curious. It would probably ruin the reflections though.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Yoked to Death
03/24/2004 06:48:34 PM
Yoked to Death
by simbamba

Comment:
This shot is incredible. What I enjoy is the way the rich texture of the speckled egg sets a nice firm base that my attention can leap from, sweeping over to the brilliant congealed yolk on the right and then cascading down on the shimmering surface you've lit, while the deep black background binds it all together. This is my favorite in the challenge.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Sagrada Familia, Barcelona Spain
03/24/2004 06:22:48 PM
Sagrada Familia, Barcelona Spain2nd Place
by Jeanseb

Comment:
This is a beautiful sillhouette. The tension between the different lines holds the composition together really well. I particularly like the way the spires and the two outer cranes are visually shooting up and then off to the left, but the jet contrail and center crane help pull it back in.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Fruits'n'Blooms
09/12/2002 11:29:00 PM
Fruits'n'Blooms
by mcrael

Comment:
I like the composition on this image. But the shadows are so light that it really flattens the picture. If you were to darken them about 10%, I think that would really help pop the fruit and flowers. --JPerez
Photographer found comment helpful.
Lunchtime
09/11/2002 09:30:00 PM
Lunchtime
by CreativeFlyPhoto

Comment:
Excellent sharpness and detail. Good tonal range. The textures pop out very nicely. The problem I have is that my eye tends to gravitate toward the bright section in the very center, but I don't feel that really serves well as a focal point. And with all the interesting things happening, I think it would've benefited from something to anchor it. (6) --JPerez
Photographer found comment helpful.
Pages:  
Showing 31 - 39 of ~39


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/23/2024 10:03:37 AM EDT.