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| 01/09/2006 05:04:15 PM |
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| 01/09/2006 04:59:28 PM |
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| 01/09/2006 01:29:12 PM |
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| 01/09/2006 12:59:53 PM |
Country Laneby BaldurTComment by nards656: Hmmm. Not sure how to vote fairly. I don't like the technique, but you've got a nice composition and it technically meets the challenge. I don't see "burst", but I'll let that slide. 7 |
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| 12/17/2005 05:00:00 PM |
Spoon Fedby BaldurTComment by hdogg4u: Critique Club WooooHoooo
Composition:
I love the concept with this photograph. I like how you used the dust of the spoon to emulate crumbs or liquid residue. I also like how the title delivers the concept however there are things in the photograph that I couldn’t figure out. One is the knife’s position, it just doesn’t seem in the correct position and this could be argued that the focal point is the fork and spoon; however the knife plays a big part with the cutting. I also think maybe showing more of the knife and the fork would have added some visual elements. Maybe using a plate with some color or texture would have enhanced it.
Technical & Set-up:
Overall the setup looks good. I’m assuming that you used some sort of lighting as I see a hot section in the lower right corner. Looking at the histogram I noticed it’s exposed towards the highlight side which I can see from the light color of the plate. I do think that maybe adding a second light from the opposite side would have eliminated the black tint on the silverware, as the histogram for the silverware is exposed more towards the Shadows.
Camera Work:
I like the DOF as all the elements in the photograph are in focus.
Post Processing:
As for post processing I don’t if there much that can be done except maybe do some levels adjustment on the silverware. This would remove some of the shadows with the silverware.
My Opinion:
This is a very nice photograph the message is very clear. It meets the challenge very well. Overall I would have rated this image between 65-75 out of 100. Well done keep up the good work.
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| 12/15/2005 03:57:47 PM |
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| 12/14/2005 07:10:18 AM |
Dark Moodby BaldurTComment by Antanas: Eyes are separately and excessively processed. I agree with the idea overall, but overprocessing makes them look unnatural. These eyes does not belong to this picture. Anyway, photo deserves good score...7 |
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| 12/13/2005 11:56:47 PM |
Dark Moodby BaldurTComment by Nordlys: Nice portrait! I would like to see the candlelight more integrated with the composition though--I wouldn't have guessed that this was done using candlelight if it wasn't in a candlelight challenge. I do like the composition, though. :-) |
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| 12/13/2005 10:52:14 PM |
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| 12/13/2005 12:21:44 PM |
Dark Moodby BaldurTComment by jpdeloof: it east can be a beautiful portrait but has it a relationship with the subject ? |
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