TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment by SandyP:
Very well done. This is very appealing. I love your colors.

TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment by naomik:
nice close-up.

Beautiful Despite Abandonment
by mischff

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

And we meet again. (I think it's cause I'm the only one working on this crit club list lol)
Anyway, I think this is a cute building. I'm not really sure that you captured the feeling of abandoned though. When I think abandoned, I think of peeling paint, broken windows, things falling off, older. While you can see that this isn't the most well loved house on the planet, it does look livable.
Setting that aside and on to the photo, I personally like the angle and framing/cropping that you chose. I like how the house is off to the left side and you have placed it out of the photo enough where you have also shown us some of the surroundings.
There is some interesting lighting, but careful, cause it does get too bright in a couple of places. See the 2 poles closest to the left frame of the photo? They are a little hot.
Focus seems a slight bit soft, but not too soft that it is hard to look at. I think that a crisper focus would help us to see the detail in the roof and flowers surrounding the house.
The address sign looks very new compared to the house, maybe that's what gives it kind of a 'non abandoned' look.
There is a white thing in the background that is a bit of a distraction. It doesn't seem to have a purpose in the photo since we can't really tell what it is anyway, and therefor doesn't seem to add anything to the overall visual appeal of the photo, so I don't think that it would take anything away if it were to be removed from the photo. In fact, I think that it might help draw more attention towards the house and forground since I wouldn't have to sit here and try to figure out what it is.
Overall I find this a pleasing, relaxing image to look at. ~Heather~

TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment by DustDevil:
Love the colors. Very simple looking watch but photo aken very nicely. I gave it an 8.

TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment by train:
nice colours and good image

TIME to buy new jewelry
by mischff

Comment by Rachel34:
love it

Es mi bola!
by mischff

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

Now this is some extreme action. Congrats on capturing this very neat scene.
The things I notice about this are things that have already been mentioned, but something that I don't think was mentioned is that the ball seems odd. It might be cause it's a different kind of soccer, but it seems like a different kind of ball. Shiny and no lines.
The background seems a tad dark, but I think that is ok here since the subjects are light and they stand out on the dark background. The only issue I see with the background is the garbage bin, but it's not like you could have just walked over and moved it anyway.
The whites do seem a tad too white in comparison to the rest of the photo.
Focus is also slightly a bit too soft. I wish this were more 'stopped' kind of like frozen in time, but you don't get this shot every day, I'm sure. I think I'd like to see the faces with more detail.
I like the framing, and I also like the dust coming from the ground. Really creates the feeling that something serious is happening there.
Love the scene in general. great capture of the 2 guys battling it out in mid air.
Very nice. ~Heather~

FALL in Love with Texas in the SPRING
by mischff

Comment by ebertdj:
A little small - but great capture 9

Beautiful Despite Abandonment
by mischff

Comment by Brad:
Nice artistic interpretation on this challenge.
There is beauty in what society calls an eyesore.

Es mi bola!
by mischff

Comment by kevrobertson:
great capture of the movement
good luck