There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Everything looks pretty well focused here, but there are some very strong textures in this one that you could have brought out even more. With a little more contrast, this one could have been even more appealing.

Lighting: I like the lighting. Everything looks very evenly lit, but just a touch flat. Upping the contrast would also remedy that look.

Composition/Content: Very well composed. I have to disagree with the comment by docvorhies. I think that there is tones of interest there, and getting closer would add to that even more.

My Opinion: Fine job meeting the challenge. With some slight adjustments, this one would have scored even better.

Eric

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by docvorhies:
Color great. Framing I would have the whole building in the shot. Not all that interesting.

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by Gosshawk:
Nice choice on the sepia tone, it ages the shot well

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by sherpet:
I like the sepia tones re this image.....

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by phinbob:
I love the tones and the aged feel.

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by cyan:
The placement of the roof join adds interest. The tone works well.

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by BrianR:
There, there's a place
where I can go
when I feel low
when I feel blue
And it's my mind
and there's time
When I'm alone
I think of you .....6

There's A Place
by chloeclogs

Comment by NoellaSue:
I love old abandoned buildings, so interesting.

as cold as ice?
by chloeclogs

Comment by OrionThe Hunter:
focus

as cold as ice?
by chloeclogs

Comment by MacDonald:
very interesting... like the shadows