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Berry Bubblicious
05/05/2007 05:34:34 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by kteach:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Well, 11th place, 35 comments, 2 favorites, and a score of 6.85. I don't know that I can be of much more help here!

Anyway, first impression was that I liked the slightly different take on the challenge. Not to photograph one of those big bubbles, but to focus in on the macro version. The shot is very... refreshing!

Composition is nice... grounded at the bottom, nothing cut off on the top or sides. Maybe just a bit too much empty space to the left? But I do like the few extra bubbles floating around in the background to keep it from being this stark whiteness, which you would have lost had you cropped the space on the left. The lighting is great, and allows the bubbles to be well defined. I love how they cover ever side of the leaves.

I think my biggest nitpick with this one is that red border. I'm just not a huge fan of colored borders. I think replacing that red with a simple white line would have worked better for me.

Congrats on a great image, and a new personal best! Looks like food is your thing to photograph! :)

Hope this has been helpful. Please feel free to PM me with any questions.
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Berry Bubblicious
05/02/2007 04:56:47 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by graphicfunk:
Invites a delicate crunchy bite. Congratulations on your top twenty finish.
Berry Bubblicious
05/02/2007 11:37:36 AM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by Beautiful-Joe:
Looks like you have a new highest rated photograph.
=)
Great work.
Great idea.
Still makes me hungry.
=P
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Berry Bubblicious
05/01/2007 02:27:45 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by zardoz:
Nice image, plenty of bubbles in this one. Very crisp and fresh. I can't make my mind up about the crop... I think I will have to come back to this one before I give it a final score.

...Ok, I came back, I decided I like the crop on a second viewing :-) Not so sure about the red pin-stripe around the border though, it seems a bit "cheesy Christmas card" to me tough it wont affect my scoring.
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Berry Bubblicious
05/01/2007 01:10:44 AM
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Berry Bubblicious
04/30/2007 10:33:42 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by jsc9306:
i think it is really nice, except the grey.. still a 10
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Berry Bubblicious
04/30/2007 09:08:39 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by Marc923:
Nice colors and lighting on this.
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Berry Bubblicious
04/30/2007 12:48:04 PM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by geinafets:
Refreshing to see a shot that is not just bubbles, but the over exposure is slightly distracting from the overall shot.
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Berry Bubblicious
04/30/2007 11:28:44 AM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by HikerDude:
I LOVE it!!! Great job
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Berry Bubblicious
04/30/2007 11:13:00 AM
Berry Bubblicious
by javamoose

Comment by BlackMambo:
If berry was centered in the shot would be much better
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