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Pink thong
08/28/2006 11:02:37 PM
Pink thong
by vincedan

Comment by thegrandwazoo:
What number and WHAT A NUMBER!
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Pink thong
08/28/2006 10:56:00 PM
Pink thong
by vincedan

Comment by kombizz:
nice curve
nice lighting
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Red Series iii
03/19/2006 07:18:10 PM
Red Series iii
by vincedan

Comment by shamrock:
Love the pose, adore the hat. Hate the fact that the hat gets lost in the background.
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Bass guitar
03/12/2006 11:54:14 PM
Bass guitar
by vincedan

Comment by Jutilda:
This is my favorite of anything you've presented so far. Really like the musician standpoint. Great vibrant color. Clear, yet a touch of softness. Makes me think of the Robert Palmer women, but nude. Nicely done.
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Light on White 3
03/11/2006 01:54:19 AM
Light on White 3
by vincedan

Comment by davidcara:
Very nice, but I find the shadows distracting. I would suggest better placement of your lighting. I would also suggest moving the model further away from the background.

Nice concept.
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Pink thong
03/07/2006 11:40:11 PM
Pink thong
by vincedan

Comment by Jutilda:
As a woman, I see more than the smooth behind and nice curves - I notice the veins on her hands which detract a bit for me. The slightly off center composition is well thought out. Good lighting.
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Light on White 3
08/05/2005 05:56:38 PM
Light on White 3
by vincedan

Comment by Jutilda:
Nice commercial type shot. Looks like a magazine ad! Great contrast with the skin tones and the black and white. How cool would this have been on a dark red background? It might've reflected on her skin, but you could fix it with desat.
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Felicity
03/15/2005 01:23:40 PM
Felicity
by vincedan

Comment by tristalisk:
Greetings From the Critique Club!!

Initial impact: What the f.....?

Meeting the challenge: This meets the challenge but is has a few technical flaws with lighting. Which will hurt the look of a good light on white shot.I will mention those later under lighting.

Clolors: The color is pretty good on most of the photo however her right hand is to dark compared to rest of the body. It just looks akward.

Sharpness. Very nice and crisp image through out the entire shot. Her eyes however could have stood out a bit more.

Lighting: I am very unsatisfied with the lighting. Most of the have been mentioned in earlier critiques but I will go over them again so that you may understand wahat I feel is wrong with the lighting. First you needed to move the model forward a few feet. This would have eleminated her shadow from the back drop some, and also would have changed you DOF enough to possibly hide the blemishes on your backdrop . Second light the background separately, this would have removed the rest of the shadow and also would have removed the dark area on the right side of your backdrop. Now you would have been left with a pure white backdrop. The next part of lighting this shot would have been to place a light on either side of the model, this would have given you and even skin tone, whiter whites, and a smoothed out the some of the fabric. Lighting was by far the worst aspect of this shot. I will assume however you are like me and straped for cash and can't afford all the fancy exras and are pretty much stuck with a standard flash. I found that stand up 500 watt shop light and a role of white paper are affordable and work pretty well.

Composition. I looked at your out takes and feel that the either of the two white shots would have done better. I agree with the others on the white face mask.. it's weird, makes no sence, and is not very attracive to look at. Great model and good pose. Better lighting and no face goo probably would have received a seven or higher from me. The out takes would have received at least a 6. I must admit however that I only gave this one a 4. Due to the things I pointed out. While this probably was not the most encouraging of critiques I hope that you at least find some of it usefull. Youve got talent. Now just get a technique down and will probably be seeing a few ribbons in your profile soon.

Tristalisk
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Felicity
03/08/2005 12:46:07 PM
Felicity
by vincedan

Comment by ovenbird:
Overall I like the photo with the exception of the white substance on the woman’s face. For me it ruins a nice photo.
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Felicity
03/07/2005 02:16:44 AM
Felicity
by vincedan

Comment by InputOutput:
Her white face really freaks me out. I like it.
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