Paradise Sunset
by orvaratli

Comment:
Looks oversharpened to me...

Roman Numerals
by sns

Comment:
Composition and lighting are nice, but there seem to be quite a lot of jagged edges. Might want to be more careful with your sharpening.

Industrial Strength
by AllanL

Comment:
I like the composition of this a lot, though if it were possible to back out a little and get the bucket in the shot that might have added something. I'd imagine that would have introduced a bunch of clutter from the background though, so cropping it like this was probably a good choice. Frankly, I think the lighting is terrible in terms of the reflections on the bottom of the arm, and the evidence of the light that has been cropped out in the lower left. The direction of the lighting is pretty good though. The colouring seems a little off, and I'm not sure if that's just because of the nature of the lighting and the fact that it is a night shot, or if has to do with the post processing. I would try it in black and white, as that is an easy way to take care of the strange colour casts you sometimes get in night shots (from sodium vapour lamps or whatever the hell they are).

Tarnished
by sargeebee

Comment:
Focus seems off, need to see more surface detail. Feels like it is cropped a little close on the right, and I think a little more rotation (counter clockwise) would help composition.

Iron & Steel
by Prof_Fate

Comment:
This is my kind of shot (in fact I think I have some very similar ones), but I think your composition could use a little work. It seems a little cluttered in the lower left, and the tree branch in the lower right is a little distracting.

Steel City on a "CLEAR DAY"
by jessie

Comment:
Your highlights seem a little blown out. Nice though. After the challenge I'd like to know where exactly this was shot from. My only day for shooting was Saturday, and it was snowing, so I figured I was better off getting in close than trying something like this, so I went for a five-hour walk down Burlington St.

Cutting Steel
by bbright

Comment:
Nice shot. A few safety issues though!

The Industrial Look!
by vikas

Comment:
I'd like to see more of the work piece and machines here (ie not cropped quite as close).

Ready for Bed
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
This is fantastic... My only complaint would be that whatever is in the background looks a little funny behind the dog's head.

00 junior
by crazyeye

Comment:
Your focus seems a little soft, and I think not cropping the top of his head and his elbow out would improve this. All the same, I like it.