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by taterbug

Comment:
Interesting work on the grain and finish of this picture. I get a feeling of helplesness and pain. Colours are good to portray that illusion as it can represent the fires of hell, or the light ened path to redemption. Composition is good as it lets lots of room for thinking and properly feel the the model's emotions. I am not sure why, but i think i would,ve liked a frame on this shot. I really like this. 8

Beauty From Within Itself
by SteveSee

Comment:
Very good europeen feel to this picture. COlours are sharp both on the cloth and on the skin. Perharps a tiny bit overexposed and some light wash on the arm and leg. For the purpose of the shot, a lighter background could've helped, so would a framing. Nice work! 7

Woman Ashamed of Her Own Nakedness
by Buckeye_Fan

Comment:
The picture seems of very poor quality, due to grain and confinment. The frame doesn't work very well because of the black top portion of the shot, where we don't actually see the frame. The desaturation of the whole shot except the eyeband is a nice touch, but i feel the colour is too rich and doesn't quite work properly. A wider composition could've helped here. Nice job non the less. 5

Sensual Topography
by lioro

Comment:
Cool idea. the background gives a very warm feeling to the shot. Its unfortunate the focus is so soft. Could've used some more sharpness on the skin, or less, depending on the idea behind the shot. Feels a little bit uncoordinated due to the side of the window seen on the background. Very nice non the less. 7

Tangle
by pcody

Comment:
very good composition of the body, reminescent of a painting. Lighting is quite appealing and reflects the skin and imperfections, giving this picture lots of 'romance'. The black void gives good tastes as well and makes this picture a classic. The frame also works very well, except on the left side, over the model's body, where there is a feel of overlaping. 8

Luscious
by inspir8tion

Comment:
Composition is interesting, unfortunatly i do not enjoy the way the face was cut (cutting parts of the upper lips take away from the 'erotica' feel for the picture). Lighting is somewhat weak as it brings good blacks but too much whites. A bit void on the left makes this picture a little too open for my taste. 6

A Simple Love
by Artyste

Comment:
Very crips lighting. Makes the skin soft and uniform, nice work. I find the composition to be lacking a little bit tho, as the framing and model position is a bit off (too much to the left). Eyes of the child are great. 8

Release
by Geocide

Comment:
Intriguing position of the model. gives the picture an interesting look. Lighting unfortunatly doesn't seem enought and doesn't allow for good whites. Spots on the lens and imperfections on the drap (black) on the right hand, as well as a little framing problem (more space on the right, more on the top). One thing that also bugs me is the lack of sens of depth in the picture. 6

Woodland Dancer
by rscorp

Comment:
Good Blacks, whites could've use a little more punch. I find the composition lacking movement, as it concentrates on the main body of the model rather then on the flow of her movements. Small details like seeing the model's pants and having the head cut brings down the score for me. 5

On the Prowl
by toddhead

Comment:
interesting composition. too bad the buttcheeks are cute half-way. I would've prefered seeing everything or no 'Crap'. Throws off the composition a little. Focus is off or soft on the face and since this could be considered a portrait, the eyes could've used some more sparkle. Skin is very faded (use of a gold umbrella to bounce light would greatly help). Model's expression is quite good. 7