Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by whiteroom:
oh how sweet! this better ribbon

Green Light
by Hrutsen

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot, but lacks focus. I checked your portfolio .. all of your higher scoring shots have that focus point.

Composition:
It pays to rotate .. off centred does not actually mean crooked. You can tell this by the angle that the lamppost is on.

Subject:
This is a good night time shot ... one i dream of being able to achieve one day myself. it defiantely meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
Well lit amd well done for an evening shoot.

To grow its vote?:
There needs to be a true focus point, fine details such as straightening need attention for all shots.

Summary:
Good addition to the portfolio. You have also recieved some valuable comments from voters which you should note.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Message edited by author 2006-02-12 20:27:07.

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by stare_at_the_sun:
Wpw...talk about underrated... I love this photo and gave it one of the 10's. I fully expected this to be in the top 10. Keep up the good work man... I added you to my fav photog list so I can keep tabs on you. Later...

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by mycelium:
great posing and lighting - great image. I really appreciate the attention to detail.

Green Light
by Hrutsen

Comment by Evaan:
Like the perspective and the foreground area. Well lit.

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by HRoxas:
Nice mood. It's a good editorial photo. Great lighting, well composed, focus is good and exposure is perfect. 8

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by Pedxer:
Wow, this one would have been good for the other challenge too,(romance) but I think that this is certainly free study level quality.

Green Light
by Hrutsen

Comment by hotpasta:
I'd love to say I like this because you obviously took a great deal of time to take the shot, but it looks a bit flat and uninspiring...I like the forground detail, but the rest of the shot is so dark and the background building looks quite boring...sorry

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by f-32:
Awesome photo! What is in her right hand? Is it a Beretta to off the James Bond type stud? And he'll fight her off with only his half-open umbrella, right? I LOVE judging photos when there's a real story behind them!

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by Maverick:
Excellent lighting and composition.