A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by scrum8:
I might have shaperned/dodged the eyes, and had her turn left just a little for more light on the face.

A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by Skip:
this shot is loaded with potential. she's a doll, and the expression tells a story. i think you would have picked up a full point or two if you had cropped off down to halfway down her forehead and cropped off at least 40% off the right. the biggest thing going against the image was the time of day it was shot--that lighting is just too strong, and the background being so lit is competing unduly with your subject. a shame, because this really could have been a contender...

Message edited by author 2005-04-27 03:49:06.

A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by md8speed:
Good DOF, but the image could use a bit more saturation

Paper running from Scissors trips over Rock
by NinjaMom

Comment by Schuff:
haha. Funny but not "wow" effect for this site. Good luck!

A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by casualguy:
Gosh, do I HAVE to be your model? She looks to be anxiously awaiting for THE MOMENT to pass........ - Like the use of DOF to diffuse the background, colors are not the best but not bad, like the composition. Image is on the soft side (maybe intended).

Paper running from Scissors trips over Rock
by NinjaMom

Comment by buzzmom:
well done made me laugh

Paper running from Scissors trips over Rock
by NinjaMom

Comment by naomik:
funny idea!

A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Sun is badly placed, causing distracting highlights in hair. Uncomfortable expression, and nothing appears to be sharp. Would be more flattering if hair was not tucked behind ears. Background is wonky. Subject placed to one side works well, but it might work better to completely crop out the writing on the t-shirt.

Paper running from Scissors trips over Rock
by NinjaMom

Comment by neophyte:
very very funny.

A Passing Moment
by NinjaMom

Comment by massulo:
crop the rt side