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Unhappy Stapler
12/29/2004 09:49:21 PM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by Tuckersmom:
Good idea and composition. I don't really care that much for the border, I don't mind the concept of the border, but I don't like the color or effect it has. Seems to distract from the shot.
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Unhappy Stapler
12/29/2004 04:00:59 PM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by messerschmitt:
i know this grumpy dude
think his twinbrother is living in my house
love these guys
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Unhappy Stapler
12/29/2004 03:33:28 PM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by eqsite:
I like this, but I think if you'd have cropped off the very top where the clear case is out of focus, it might have looked better. Also, the border is a bit distracting for me, but I know that this is one of those hotly debated issues, so I won't mark you down on that :)
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Unhappy Stapler
12/28/2004 08:22:59 PM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by scrum8:
Nice composition. Not sure about the border thought. Might have cropped it a little lower to take out the reddish color at the top. Well done.
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Unhappy Stapler
12/27/2004 05:46:27 PM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by sannok:
I wouldn't be too happy with staples coming down on my face all the time, either :D
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Gentle Breeze
12/27/2004 03:06:57 PM
Gentle Breeze
by thommo

Comment by brianlh:
This comment is provided courtesy of the Critique Club :)

You've been fortunate enough this far to have already received a few insightful comments, so some of this will sound familiar.

First looking at the image, I can't help but think that the composition here is quite solid. The boy's closed eyes convey a relaxed mood, which is appropriate for a playful image like this. I think your choice of a straight-on profile shot probably works much better than if you had approached this at an angle, as it leaves plenty of room for separation and distinction between the boy and the bubbles, and potentially the background.

I do not think the background is too distracting, as it gives the image a schoolyard feel. However, to address some of the comments you have received, it perhaps might have been advisable to try to throw it slightly more out of focus. Since you used an aperture of 4.5 here, I don't see you necessarily being able to lower that without possibly losing some sharpness in the foreground. Moving yourself and the subject further away from the wall may have been an option.

You've nailed the timing, catching the bubbles at just the right moment. The slight blur in the bubbles could (depending on the viewer) be interpreted as a good way to convey motion and action (especially contrasted against the stillness of the boy). Others yet may prefer a stiller image to capture the exact 'moment', although I think that it would give it more of an artificial feel.

The main thing here that I think holds room for improvement is, like others mentioned, the coloring of some areas on the subject's skin and hair, which occasionally appear to have a bluish-green tint. I have an inclination to believe that this probably was not in the original shot (though I may be wrong), and may actually be due to your use of Auto-features that you mention in your description. While these auto features can sometimes make an image better, they can also sometimes interpret things incorrectly and create problems. In the future, you might find it more advantageous to perform all the post-processing 'manually' without the auto feature.

Overall a great shot, and anything seen with room for improvement is nothing that can't be performed/fixed in photoshop - possibly via Layer Masks for the background and some Adjustment Layers for the Color Balance (may want to mask this as well, to avoid affecting the color in the bubbles).

Message edited by author 2004-12-27 15:16:04.
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Unhappy Stapler
12/27/2004 08:54:08 AM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by siggi:
dont like the frame.
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Unhappy Stapler
12/27/2004 03:27:52 AM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by grandmarginal:
So I'm not the only one who's the clown's face since I was a kid! Nice, a bit too dark. Focal lenght would work better if it would catch the whole picture in focus.
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Unhappy Stapler
12/27/2004 12:22:45 AM
Unhappy Stapler
by thommo

Comment by Dseale:
lol
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Broken Vow
12/22/2004 04:53:59 PM
Broken Vow
by thommo

Comment by gaurawa:
Hello from the Critique Club :)

I think this a very emotive photograph and a very interesting take on the challenge.

I would have to agree with the other commentors on this photograph that ring if in focus would add a great impact. I would recommend trying to focus on the ring and use higher F number and let the DOF work for you. The placement of the ring looks good, but if you follow the rule of thirds, it might be helpful for this shot.

Lighting is a bit harsh on the ring and you can see a lot of glare. If you are using any kind of lamp, you might like to try and use any soft fabric as diffuser. Again I see a yellow cast around the ring which you might like to avoid. A plain white envelope would make this shot more appealing. I believe you wanted to show the yellow boxes to represent its a post or mail and they look ok to me.

Background as it stands now is nice and simple, but a darker background might help accentuate the subject. I would love to see a combination of darker background and more white envelope.

Overall I think, you captured a very emotive moment here which can be improved with a more defined focus and better lighting.

If you have any questions about this critique, feel free to contact me. You can use the pm on my profile.
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