11th Avenue
by k4ffy

Comment by CHETIRQUEN:
NEEDS MORE EXPUSURE

LED
by k4ffy

Comment by Spanish_Grease:
Greetings from the Critque Club!

I think what you need to think about with this photo is subject - what is the audience supposed to be looking at? What is supposed to draw my eye? At the moment, all that I have to look at is a bright light surrounded by blue fog, while this is a very interesting effect, it is in no ways a sophisticated or interesting subject matter.

Effects like this should be used to enhance subject matter, not AS subject matter. Perhaps using this kind of lighting to illuminate a manakin head (LOL I know, but it would look cool) could provide a very erie effect.

Good Luck!

Lee

11th Avenue
by k4ffy

Comment by swimlizfish:
this is quite a sexy rooftop shot if i have ever seen one. the border is a nice touch. reminds me of this really great night i had once...

11th Avenue
by k4ffy

Comment by gsingal:
well done. when I look at this picture, it screams out to me "DAMN! THAT'S AWESOME!" kind of like your mom last night. 10.

11th Avenue
by k4ffy

Comment by whatdewuc:
Could see this on on my wall!

11th Avenue
by k4ffy

Comment by stoney66:
Nice! I used the same concept, however yours turned out better than mine :) 10

Catch up
by k4ffy

Comment by Huey:
its fake

Catch up
by k4ffy

Comment by BLIS102:
the front is not in focus enough but it is a good concept

Catch up
by k4ffy

Comment by e301:
Something very odd happening with colour balance here - that fade to very stronf yellow in the background, and the 'oranging' of the big tomato. I don't like this composition - don't see the point or use of the large area of dead space at top.

Catch up
by k4ffy

Comment by marinarus:
you can tell that the first tomato is not real