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KrazyKatComment by lionelm: FIRST IMPRESSION : NIce landscape, nice barn, nice colors.
COMPOSITION : Nice composition! I lile how the trees give a sense of depth to the picture. The tree on the left distract me a little in a sense that I would prefer to see more of it. .. or less of it (maybe to remove the piece of blue sky in the left of the tree).
The picture seems to me a little unbalanced vertically, I think I would have prefered a little less of the sky and more of the grass in front of the barn. I feel like I am 'hitting' the barn right away when 'entering' the picture. It is reenforced by the two black areas that convey some agressivity as well I think.
Nice colors and nice opposition green/reds
TECHNICAL : Nothing special. I wonder what the shot would have been with more details in the black area but it does not distract me too much.
DIGITAL PROCESSING : not visible if any = good
MY OPINION : Fit the 'landscape' challenge to even if the barn obviously draw all the attention. Still .. it is iwithin a landscape .. not a pure match to the challenge but well enough !
I like the picture, my main comment would be that you could have step back one step or 2 to have a little more grass in front of the barn.
Good job
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Lionel