Image |
Comment |
| 08/04/2004 11:56:49 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/04/2004 11:51:14 PM |
Shameby wwwavengerComment: I was wondering how many small um... zippers would be in this challenge. |
| 08/04/2004 11:50:02 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/04/2004 11:49:18 PM |
Gone Fish'inby debitiptonComment: I don't like the green in the background. Good take on the challenge though. |
| 08/04/2004 11:46:50 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/02/2004 11:32:54 PM |
Giraffeby MotoCycleBoiComment: Even though the flower is in focus, the stem keeps bringing my eye to the vase as the main focal point of the image. With the vase beeing so OOF, it's kinda distracting. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/02/2004 11:13:53 PM |
Splish Splashby CoreyLanComment: This looks like a really good picture, but it's too small to see any detail. I think you'd score a lot higher fif you used all 640 pixels. |
| 07/30/2004 01:34:32 AM |
Simple Eleganceby bmatt17Comment: Originally posted by Imagineer: Hello from the Critique Club!
......................................................
When viewing challenge images I like to see shots which work outside of the competition - normally a sign that it's a good shot regardless of votes. This probably suffers in that respect, mainly due to the skewed arrangement, blue colour cast and rather centred composition. The set-up clearly shows balance but it doesn't engage the viewer much beyond this, which ultimately is what may win votes.
I would ask; why the colour treatment and why the background? If it's difficult to answer then it's probably what many voters were wondering too. I would have chosen pure white or even a very dark colour and shot it from lower down, avoiding the shadows on the background too. This would demonstrate the balance element more dramatically. Since you can't easily hide the fact that the fork was tucked under the spoon, it could have looked more impressive edge-on (90 degrees).
Cheers
Jon |
Thanks for the Critique Jon. The reason I chose the background and the color, was because it covered up the crummy setup I had. I wanted a pure white background, but didn't have what I needed at the time. You're suggestion of a dark brackground and angle I could've done and I think it would have improved the shot a lot. Thanks again. |
| 07/19/2004 11:13:27 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 07/14/2004 09:32:43 PM |
"Did you say ...Dog!"by bongoComment: Great take on the challenge. I think you should have pushed the plant back on the other side of the fence though. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/19/2024 07:30:34 AM EDT.